10.16.2009

the purpose of school

Nguyen Thi Ngoc Nga
Class:0812002A
ID:08120023

The purpose of school

Introduction: All of children were born, grew up, and went to school to learn maths, geography, biology, history, and all the other subjects. It is said that it was a matter of course. We went to school day by day as we were a child to collect the knowledge from teachers or in books. However, have you ever asked yourself why we go to school? Why do we learn these things? Moreover, are the things all that learn at school? What's the importance of school in our life?
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Paragraph 1
Topic sentence: go to school to prepare necessary knowledge for the future
- Learning there own language in order to contact, share and tell others clearly what we want to know and understand what the others tell us
- Learning foreign languages in order to be able to communicate and learn more information in the wide world
- Learning maths to measure and count things, geography to know something about the world, etc
Every thing we study at school has more use that is practical in our life
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Topic sentence: go to school is to learn society skills.
- Communication
- Creative thinking
- problem solving
- Adaptability
Go to school not only learn theory but also learn the way to apply them effectually.
Conclusion: the purpose of school provides the basic knowledge and soft skills which are very important for our life.

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ngoclinh081202A nói...

coherence and unity: OK
idea: OK
thesis statement:not clear